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8-17-04
Written in blood was this ancient legend,
A deity’s Staff passed to priest of day,
A curse was passed to him that day
But a loophole was to be seen,
A simple boy was put to the task
The last one left of that cursed line
It is impossible, maybe,
Will he make it? Can he prevail?
I had to change the second and fourth lines of the last section (my education regarding what you call different things in poetry currently escapes me). I was using the pronoun "he" improperly and it was driving me crazy. I fixed it though. The poem was written with inspiration from my story The Staff of the Sun (which is currently under a(nother) rewrite).
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